a work in progress

[johnboythabarbarian]

--Light pops on the titan tron In the center of a black room is johnboy rocking back and forth just another light to see him but nothing else--

Andrew: Hey its Johnboy...I saw him earlier backstage

Blake: Lets see what he has to say
Johnboy: When i was a kid they wouldn't play with me. I was always picked last. You know whats its like to b picked last all the time even the girls got picked before me.It makes a boy hate.To wish to c every 1 hurt.Then 1 day i got my chance but i wasn't to good the ball hit my noise then everyone came around.Oh the joy my pain brought others.

--Johnboy reach for a peice of glass--

Blake: Get used to it...Life's hard

Andrew: What? If you was treated like that I'm sure you wouldn't like it

Johnboy: You See when you are in pain every 1 want's to see you and have you around if u don't care about the pain

--He moves the glass to his forehead--

Blake: He's mad

Andrew: I feel sorry for this dude

Johnboy: The blood...

--He digs it in and blood comes forth like a waterfall--

Andrew: OH MY GOD...He really has gone mad

Blake: This is sick...This shouldn't be on live broadcast

Johnboy: its warm its salty and it makes you a star. So? is who want's to bleed with me the champ? Naa not yet but soon. For now i want the MOST Extreme to come at me don't make me wait because if i have to find a fight it could be very

--He cuts again--

Blake: Oh not again

Andrew: Johnboy has LOST IT

Johnboy: Very bad for all hahahahahahaha

[GM King Neli]

John you need to lay it out better
add commentary in between and other actions
add the actions like this
--King Neli sits down on a chair--

[GM King Neli]

I edited it thats how it should be lay out for next time

[J.B.L]

--Suddenly an titan tron shows up and a superstar grabs the mick and say--

Blake: And who is this guy ?

Andrew: Well Blake he hasn't come with friendly comments here Let see what he has too say.

J.B.L: Johnboy Who DO you think you are do you think that you will gain respect from others saying that's BS *
J.B.L: John listen careful now. You Don´t wanna to get hurt so i give you an advice You shouldn't´t get in trouble with these Champs

J.B.L: Not Because I Am actually ´Caring about you´ but you should consider your speech. Getting In troube with the Top Superstars isn't a good idea.

--Johnboy starts to get angry--

J.B.L: Ok calm down lets settle this man to man. Me and you right now. Get a ref out here

Andrew: wow a match right now? This should be good


Blake: Damn right it should be great

[GM King Neli]

Ok Ive edited both RPs that how the RPs should be set out

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