Fedors warzone debut

[Fedor emelianenko]

Fedor Emelianenko makes his way to the ring witch a mic
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Fedor:Hello all warzone fans.Im the new guy here and my name is Fedor.I was born in small town of the big russia.I grown up in a poor family.But when i was a kid my dream was to be a best fighter in the world.In my town was small gym where i was training sambo.And soon i became the russian sambo champion.Then i became the MMA fighter.I fight in japan where i became the world champion.I beat the most populars American fighters.

Fedor pauses

The crowd cheers:Fedor,Fedor,Fedor.

But now im in Addicted to Pain Wresting.This is my second roster in my first roster i was a champion and in my new roster i gonna be champion too.And when i gonna won my champion in warzone you all gonna no my name.

Fedor drops the mic and leaves the ring

[The Hitman]

plz lengthen it out a bit

[Dwayne Daniels]

lol...uau.

[Clevland Griffin]

u need a longer rp put mor detail in it b creative

[Fedor emelianenko]

update

[Dylan Meech]

It has actually now shortened in length....

[Fedor emelianenko]

when i gonna get my first match

[Norwegian_Playboy]

m8 here is a few tips

you wane shorten the length of ur speaks .. ect. hey i just wane type sumit silly, very fun huh. This can be split up like.

me: hey i just wane type sumit...

-- Takes a deep breath and look up on crowd.

me: sumit silly, very fun that is huh.

not sure if my point comes out flagging high, but dont "talk" to much put some action, like fans chants or maybe something like u do. shit even make a fart if u feel like it

[Dwayne Daniels]

man.. you english sucks, no offense, but try to work this a little more

"And when i gonna won my champion in warzone you all gonnna hear my name FEDOR EMELIANENKO."

wtf man?

Try harder man

Yes, you can [/Obama]

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